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Lesson
Four: Sentence Variety
Many students think that the
longer the sentence they write, the better the sentence. This is far from the
truth. You do not need long, complicated sentences to show that you are a good
writer. In fact, short sentences often pack the most punch. The best essays
contain a variety of sentence lengths, mixed within any given paragraph. Try
reading your essay out-loud, pausing at every period. Listen to the rhythm of
your prose. Are all of the sentences the same length? If each of your
sentences twists and turns for an entire paragraph, or you run out of breath
at any point, break them up into smaller statements. You may also want to try
a more methodical approach:
EXERICISE #3:
SENTENCE VARIETY
Once
you have completed your essay, try labeling each sentence “short” (under
10 words), “medium” (under 20 words), or “long” (20 or more words). A
nice paragraph might read something like M S M L M S. A dry essay would be S S
S M L L L.
Continue
to Word Choice
From ESSAYS THAT WILL GET YOU INTO COLLEGE, by Amy Burnham,
Daniel Kaufman, and Chris Dowhan.
Copyright 1998 by Dan Kaufman.
Reprinted by arrangement with Barron's Educational Series, Inc.
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